akarra's comments
This haiku is far more cryptic than the previous ones. It is probably an example of why first impressions - thankfully - fail when it comes to poetry. The last line gives us the distinct impression something bad has happened.But read the commentary and notice what's hiding in that middle line: there's a hidden spring image. Something is being lost, absolutely - whether it is a bad thing is another question entirely.
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